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Sundsvalls Kits Thread
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Here are a few constructive criticisms in regards to your England and Sweden home kits.
England:
The England badge needs to have the word England above it and a World Cup Star above that. The captain's armband has the England badge on it, not the word 'captain'. There isn't a stripe on the arm, it is rather just a small tick at the bottom of the sleeve (or in the middle in the case of the long sleeved shirt), it is similar to the ones on Nike shirts. The line on the right short isn't that large, it is similar in size and shape to that of the long piece of the cross on the shoulder. Finally there isn't a red line on the socks but rather a thin navy blue line at the top of the socks, it is a semi circle as well so the line isn't at the front. Back of sock -> C <- Front of Sock. I hope that made some sense. The lines on the shorts and at the end of the sleeves also follow this pattern.
Sweden:
I don't know much about the Sweden kits but I'll try to explain to the best of my knowledge. It is almost identical to the England kits varying only in colour and a few minor details. For example the cross of Sweden, which you have placed, on the right shoulder should be on the left. On the right shoulder there is a thin line.
Other than that you are doing very well for you first few kits keep up the great work. I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism.
Here are some pictures to help explain what I was on about:
Sweden:
I don't know much about the Sweden kits but I'll try to explain to the best of my knowledge. It is almost identical to the England kits varying only in colour and a few minor details. For example the cross of Sweden, which you have placed, on the right shoulder should be on the left. On the right shoulder there is a thin line. Sweden does not have anything on the arms like England do also. Your shorts for Sweden are fairly accurate; just make the lines a bit thinner.
Other than that you are doing very well for you first few kits keep up the great work. I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism.
Here are some pictures to help explain what I was on about:
England Home - Short Sleeved
England Home - Long Sleeved
Sweden Home - Short Sleeved
England:
The England badge needs to have the word England above it and a World Cup Star above that. The captain's armband has the England badge on it, not the word 'captain'. There isn't a stripe on the arm, it is rather just a small tick at the bottom of the sleeve (or in the middle in the case of the long sleeved shirt), it is similar to the ones on Nike shirts. The line on the right short isn't that large, it is similar in size and shape to that of the long piece of the cross on the shoulder. Finally there isn't a red line on the socks but rather a thin navy blue line at the top of the socks, it is a semi circle as well so the line isn't at the front. Back of sock -> C <- Front of Sock. I hope that made some sense. The lines on the shorts and at the end of the sleeves also follow this pattern.
Sweden:
I don't know much about the Sweden kits but I'll try to explain to the best of my knowledge. It is almost identical to the England kits varying only in colour and a few minor details. For example the cross of Sweden, which you have placed, on the right shoulder should be on the left. On the right shoulder there is a thin line.
Other than that you are doing very well for you first few kits keep up the great work. I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism.
Here are some pictures to help explain what I was on about:
Sweden:
I don't know much about the Sweden kits but I'll try to explain to the best of my knowledge. It is almost identical to the England kits varying only in colour and a few minor details. For example the cross of Sweden, which you have placed, on the right shoulder should be on the left. On the right shoulder there is a thin line. Sweden does not have anything on the arms like England do also. Your shorts for Sweden are fairly accurate; just make the lines a bit thinner.
Other than that you are doing very well for you first few kits keep up the great work. I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism.
Here are some pictures to help explain what I was on about:
England Home - Short Sleeved
England Home - Long Sleeved
Sweden Home - Short Sleeved
Hi man......well i gotta say for your first kits they are really good.Only things i can see that might cause a problem are the size of some of your logos.Take the UAE kits,the Umbro and the flag on the shirt are too "tall",they should be compressed a bit more otherwise they will look really long ingame.The collars are good but you should make your lines (like on the front of the spain kit) a little lighter in colour so it dont stand out so much,and dont go too crazy with the bevel and emboss.Keep things subtle ,thats usually the best way.You have some very jagged lines on some parts of the kits,but i guess you know that.I know you will sort that problem out as you make more kits and then you will find a way to do it,like the rest of us did.Anyway Curswine is the man to tell you a little more technically, where you might need to improve.I dont really know the ins and outs of kitmaking like he does and i do not have the attention to detail either.I try to keep my kits very simple,but you can make your kits exactly how you want to.Just remember ,some people will like your kits and some people will not......do not take it to heart,everyone is entitled to their own opinion....even if they are wrong.....hehehehee....keep going mate ,i think you are doing really well. 
not bad man.....not bad at all.....thats the old Prem logo though ....here is the newest one........
http://www.soccergaming.tv/showthread.php?t=110084&page=13&pp=15
http://www.soccergaming.tv/showthread.php?t=110084&page=13&pp=15