redreflection - an abstract collab

[::Jason::]

Yesterday I started this piece from a render 'Accuration' had sent me. I've done all the photoshopping to it and added the 2D. It's not fully finished yet, so your constructive critisism (and straight bashing too) would prolly help me to make the final product better. So basically I turned a grey image of a 3d-model to this.
Shinji, I already know you prolly won't like this at all..

notice that it's not fully finished.

EDIT: there's just the newest version uploaded atm.

 

[::shinji::]

Re: redreflection - an abstract collab

Originally posted by ::Jason::

Shinji, I already know you prolly won't like this at all..

you're right, I hate it....abstract 3d renders are borring, the composition is poor, and the typography looks really n00b.

 

[bjmenge]

What is the point of it? It's just some random shape, with some lines and text over it.

 

[PhiLLer]

The only thing that takes any remote skill is to make that render in a 3D program...and you didn't do that.

 

[m3th0d]

can someone please tell me wtf accuration means!

 

[::Jason::]

no matter what, an improved version has been uploaded to da.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6019650/