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my poem

M

Me3

BANNED
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I jus wrote a poem. hope ya'll like it n tell me what do u think of it.


Falling into my soul
I don't want to adore
Losing all I miss
My heart lacks a breath
Stepping into madness
Staring at what I'm close to
All I can find is sadness

Walking along the sun
Trying to have some fun
Scandals are all I see
They immobilize my knee
Scared of what I believe
Carrying the obsession of conceive

Facing the way I'm in
As it blends I feel my sin
The darkness that isn't real
I'm into it while I'm eating my cold meal
Looking for something within the past
The unfadable crash insists to last

Are you there or I'm misplaced ?
I can see your heat among my fate
Talking to God but he's not hearing me
Screaming your name to my walls, they're not feeling me
Running through my nothingness so fast
Chasing something around my past

Addicted to what I don't understand
Needing what I don't wanna demand
Thinking of what I wont believe in
Crying for what I can't proceed in
These long streets I will never walk
Those people want me not to talk

Losing all I need to face
I'm receiving some messages
From my forgotten rage
Making me destroy this blast
But I can't do it
I've become too weak in this vast

Going into seconds
Counting these free stones
I'm wondering if I could speak
I would tell you
From the moment I started to seek
And the minute I was the craziest man alive
I tried my best to show you
Missing you is the only thing
That makes me survive...
 
yoyo913

yoyo913

Team Captain
wow y r u posting this

it probably means something to you, but to us its probably all bullsh!t... good job
 
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leungtl

Manager
Staff member
That's awesome.

People have different ways in expressing themselves; yours is obviously in words :)
 
S

Shiryu

Senior Squad
I like it.:D

But is alittle too long, like you shoved too many ideas into it. Remember this when you're writting something else. The greatest poem ever written , is the shortest.;) But that's just my taste , i suppose.

Here's one of my favorites, and it's not that long.

The Paradox
 
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