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Tom

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again i dont think Sean Dundee was terribly young when he signed for Pool. Not sure about Marinelli, dont believe he cost boro a terribly large amount.

Horatiu, did you actually like it?
 
yoyo913

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Yes, i usually don't read much but I read most of your article (and i was feeling sick too)

you're pretty good but you should try to put more passion in it
 
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Tom

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cheers, only thing i would say is what i said further up, my editor took bits out of the newcaslte abuse :D
 
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Tom

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its open now, i was simply stressing the need to get back on topic. If anyone has any other views etc, please tell me because i want to get better, this is what i want to do for the rest of my life, so i need people to help me to get to be a better writer.
 
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rpvankasteren

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Well, your article could do with some definition. Too short for an in-depth study (and not in-depth enough at that), but too long for a column. And it's definitely not news. :p You could try hitting 2500-3000 words and indulging on other clubs'/countries' situations more.

Say Tom, what dark corners do you frequent, really?
 
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Tom

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you clearly dont read enough articles Ruud in magazines/newspapers or online for that matter. Most are around 600-1200 words and the depthness depends on what the context is. There is no possible way my article needed to be deeper, as no-one read it and it would cease to be an article, not only for the fact it would never be published, fut also for the simple reason that it would be an essay, and an complicated and decididly mundane one at that.
 
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Tom

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yep, and i could give you answer to that, but unfortunately i have to reply with:

yardi yardi yah

or the equally intruiging:

wankpot united

:)
 
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Tom

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im still playing my Madden 2004 franchise, the game is starting to show its age, no Ben Roethlisberger or Eli Manning...

Anyway, this has well and trully and, rather beautifully gone off topic, so if anyone has any other opinions on the article (and i hope you do), please go to the sister-thread in the soccer forum at: http://www.soccergaming.tv/showthread.php?t=129941

Danka.

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